Response to First Draft

After completing the first draft and looking back over the response forms from the rest of the class our group has realized that there are 4 main points of improvements that seems to appear on majority of response forms. That is sound, fluidity of  shots, the incompleteness of the trailer is and also the title and release date.

Even though I believe that are group did a good first draft there is still a lot of improvements that we have to make in order to reach our final goal of having a successful trailer.

The three main points that we will be focus on for our 2nd draft. This is Fluidity of shots, incompleteness and title and date release.

The reason why we are not focusing on sound as much is because at the moment the school has been dismissed for school holidays therefore it is hard to get individuals for sound so we have to wait till we are back at school to record them. 

Even though we have to improve on these points there are features of our trailer that I really do like. One of these features is the format and sequence of the shots, it makes our product look like a trailer rather than a film opening sequence which is important. 

One thing that i personally disliked about the trailer is that we have not finished and included the common features of a trailer such as BBFC rating and release date. This is will the main focus in our second draft, that we include all the common features of a trailer so that we can create a successful trailer.

WHAT HAVE I LEARNT?

This personal evaluation of our first draft has allowed me to understand what I personally feel about the trailer and allowed me to come up with some ideas that will enhance the performance of the trailer.